author. no negativity, just a little criticism. read interviews with people after rape before taking such a job. also check out the games - binary star; forcefully yours; overtime (demo)
I put the tags there for that reason, also that this is fictional, I was also a victim myself at one point when a date put their hands on me a decade ago. It wasn't easy, but I had to deal with things in a my own way, I do not recommend it to a rape victim AT ALL, this game does not represent what happens in reality it's pure fiction.
The game is a mix of rape/dubious consent where it becomes a twisted love in some way. It's meant to cater to the act of forced love as a fetish, and not to represent the extreme act of rape as a whole. These guys would all be in jail if they were real people.
Real rape I do not condone, it's horrible, and wrong.
I wouldn't recommend the game to anyone who forced into those situations in real life. The approach is meant to be different in the sense, for those interested in yanderes, obsessive love.
thanks for the answer! I empathize with you. It’s terrible to go through this.
I was referring to MC actions in the hospital; no questions about the actions during the meeting of the white man (everything turned out stylishly and concisely).
The only crazy crackpot in the hospital is the MC, if they makes jokes and joyful after what happened. It is not necessary to put the players in a stupid position
It's a chapter undergoing modifications. It's not really meant too have jokes, Octavius is extremely petty. Abnormally so, I can focus on making him a bit darker if that's what everyone wants.
This is the second comment I got in one day about it the exact same thing. so this situation actually has me super frustrated that it's upsetting a bunch of people all at the same time. It's a bit difficult to deal with. I don't have a team of people to consult with since I'm just one person doing everything. So I'll need to reconsidure my position on the game.
Please, author, don't reconsider anything. Just listen what your instincts and inspiration are telling you. Art under external pressure is no longer art. It will sound trite, but create what your heart tells you, and don't break under pressure from people who have different views, especially if they can't distinguish fiction from real life. Games like yours should be our safe space, where artists can express themselves and we, the readers, cam indulge our fetishes, and not be lectured.
No negativity, but read about fetishes. Some women actually like such scenarios in their bedroom or in their fantasies... And the "yandere" genre exists for a reason ;)
whenever I want your very important personal opinion, I will personally address you with a letter and bow. this case, I contacted the developer. but next time I will ask Your permission. Maybe You should read what the “choice game” is before being like a plug in the ass
also a rape victim, in fact i have a 6 year old and none of the 3 men were identified. everyone reacts to situations differently. they gave warnings so if people don't heed them then what else can they do? i choose to not let one night define who i am and tend to enjoy people who aren't afraid to write things that others would find offensive. thats what diversity of thought is and visual novels are nothing but other peoples stories in a game mode. they can write it however they want and id actually like the game less if they went walked on eggshells thinking it would be offensive. personally if you think its too much then just go find something else. and dont speak for all victims
(edit to say that 6 year old was conceived by one of those 3 men)
Hi, Not sure where to mention this... the game is amazing and i got the paid version last night and whenever I attempt to download the paid version it tells me the file isn't available on the site
Absolutely <3 actually I'm going to be writing some bios on them ;) I want to make a bit more advanced biographys, especially in the next day or so! Please do link the fanfic if you write it. It's a ton of fun to see what type of story you make with them!<3<3<3
Delmar is the gentle manipulator. He's soft spoken, and warm. He seems to be empathetic too. However he's duo faced. He's got a darker side to him. So on the surface he's rather kind, but he's very calculated. He tries to coax you into trusting him, to enforce sort of obedience?
His traits..
Coaxing/comforting is his manipulation weapon. He uses that to guide you where he wants you.
He does so by lowering your guard, aiming to make submission come more naturally, getting you to do it on your own.
He acts empathetic towards you, using touch, comfort, and given he wants you, he takes on a more loving role in manipulation too.
He focuses on calming the situation, nerves through a tight hug gentle kisses. Acting as if he's a lover. His grip is extremely tight making it very hard to even push or pull away.
Height as in how tall? I think between 5,9 and 6,1 ;) specific but not super tall ;) Lorian would be 6,3.
As for personality... Dreagan is kind of a silent figure often counts on Delmar to manipulate if he knows the person won't be responsive, while Delmar manipulates with comfort and touch.
went through my notes and refined the summary. I'll send you delmars in a moment
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Dreagan is:
Cold, and calculating, he's not cruel, and not as manipulative like Delmar. But he follows the rules, and won't tolerate deviation. He's sort of the enforcer to get results, if Delmar struggles to get anything.
He's also a bit more solider-like. You'd feel kind of stressed out to reason with him. Heavy presence?
His traits ...
He's authoritive, he has a very commanding presence even when not talking, he carries out orders no matter what they are.
He doesn't negotiate, he follows the rules
He's detached where, he's not affected by pleas/outbursts.
He's also pretty observant, when Delmar manipulates he'll tend to wait for the best moment to step in.
He's somewhat loyal or was loyal to Lorian. Up until the idea of actually leaving joker has arrived.
Although he likes the joker kingdom. he and Delmar want to experience life outside joker. And possibly go as unaffiliated or to spades(everyone sees spades as the safe haven. Given the ruler is the dormouse, Milo, he's considured to be pretty forgiving, and doesn't mind taking in others)
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author. no negativity, just a little criticism. read interviews with people after rape before taking such a job. also check out the games - binary star; forcefully yours; overtime (demo)
I put the tags there for that reason, also that this is fictional, I was also a victim myself at one point when a date put their hands on me a decade ago. It wasn't easy, but I had to deal with things in a my own way, I do not recommend it to a rape victim AT ALL, this game does not represent what happens in reality it's pure fiction.
The game is a mix of rape/dubious consent where it becomes a twisted love in some way. It's meant to cater to the act of forced love as a fetish, and not to represent the extreme act of rape as a whole. These guys would all be in jail if they were real people.
Real rape I do not condone, it's horrible, and wrong.
I wouldn't recommend the game to anyone who forced into those situations in real life. The approach is meant to be different in the sense, for those interested in yanderes, obsessive love.
thanks for the answer! I empathize with you. It’s terrible to go through this.
I was referring to MC actions in the hospital; no questions about the actions during the meeting of the white man (everything turned out stylishly and concisely).
The only crazy crackpot in the hospital is the MC, if they makes jokes and joyful after what happened. It is not necessary to put the players in a stupid position
It's a chapter undergoing modifications. It's not really meant too have jokes, Octavius is extremely petty. Abnormally so, I can focus on making him a bit darker if that's what everyone wants.
This is the second comment I got in one day about it the exact same thing. so this situation actually has me super frustrated that it's upsetting a bunch of people all at the same time. It's a bit difficult to deal with. I don't have a team of people to consult with since I'm just one person doing everything. So I'll need to reconsidure my position on the game.
Thanks for bringing it to my attention
Please, author, don't reconsider anything. Just listen what your instincts and inspiration are telling you. Art under external pressure is no longer art. It will sound trite, but create what your heart tells you, and don't break under pressure from people who have different views, especially if they can't distinguish fiction from real life. Games like yours should be our safe space, where artists can express themselves and we, the readers, cam indulge our fetishes, and not be lectured.
I'll definitely check those games out ;)
No negativity, but read about fetishes. Some women actually like such scenarios in their bedroom or in their fantasies... And the "yandere" genre exists for a reason ;)
whenever I want your very important personal opinion, I will personally address you with a letter and bow. this case, I contacted the developer. but next time I will ask Your permission. Maybe You should read what the “choice game” is before being like a plug in the ass
also a rape victim, in fact i have a 6 year old and none of the 3 men were identified. everyone reacts to situations differently. they gave warnings so if people don't heed them then what else can they do? i choose to not let one night define who i am and tend to enjoy people who aren't afraid to write things that others would find offensive. thats what diversity of thought is and visual novels are nothing but other peoples stories in a game mode. they can write it however they want and id actually like the game less if they went walked on eggshells thinking it would be offensive. personally if you think its too much then just go find something else. and dont speak for all victims
(edit to say that 6 year old was conceived by one of those 3 men)
Hi, Not sure where to mention this... the game is amazing and i got the paid version last night and whenever I attempt to download the paid version it tells me the file isn't available on the site
Thats really weird. I'm going to test this right now! um did you go for the windows version?
send me a message Soupinsoup@gmail.com
Sorry for late response, Sent you an email!
some of the text is going offscreen like this
btw omg the game is soooooo goood!!!! 0v0
Yay Thanks for letting me know!!! also glad you like it ;)
An amazing game, I completely loved it.
Some scenes and things reminded me to Victorian society and Dracula (the book), it´s such a rich game. Thanks for making it :3,
I'm so glad you like it <3
it look good
I will play your game thank!
I hope you enjoy it <3
Absolutely <3 actually I'm going to be writing some bios on them ;) I want to make a bit more advanced biographys, especially in the next day or so! Please do link the fanfic if you write it. It's a ton of fun to see what type of story you make with them!<3<3<3
Delmar is the gentle manipulator. He's soft spoken, and warm. He seems to be empathetic too. However he's duo faced. He's got a darker side to him. So on the surface he's rather kind, but he's very calculated. He tries to coax you into trusting him, to enforce sort of obedience?
His traits..
Coaxing/comforting is his manipulation weapon. He uses that to guide you where he wants you.
He does so by lowering your guard, aiming to make submission come more naturally, getting you to do it on your own.
He acts empathetic towards you, using touch, comfort, and given he wants you, he takes on a more loving role in manipulation too.
He focuses on calming the situation, nerves through a tight hug gentle kisses. Acting as if he's a lover. His grip is extremely tight making it very hard to even push or pull away.
He makes escaping him hard.
Height as in how tall? I think between 5,9 and 6,1 ;) specific but not super tall ;) Lorian would be 6,3.
As for personality... Dreagan is kind of a silent figure often counts on Delmar to manipulate if he knows the person won't be responsive, while Delmar manipulates with comfort and touch.
went through my notes and refined the summary. I'll send you delmars in a moment
----------
Dreagan is:
Cold, and calculating, he's not cruel, and not as manipulative like Delmar. But he follows the rules, and won't tolerate deviation. He's sort of the enforcer to get results, if Delmar struggles to get anything.
He's also a bit more solider-like. You'd feel kind of stressed out to reason with him. Heavy presence?
His traits ...
He's authoritive, he has a very commanding presence even when not talking, he carries out orders no matter what they are.
He doesn't negotiate, he follows the rules
He's detached where, he's not affected by pleas/outbursts.
He's also pretty observant, when Delmar manipulates he'll tend to wait for the best moment to step in.
He's somewhat loyal or was loyal to Lorian. Up until the idea of actually leaving joker has arrived.
Although he likes the joker kingdom. he and Delmar want to experience life outside joker. And possibly go as unaffiliated or to spades(everyone sees spades as the safe haven. Given the ruler is the dormouse, Milo, he's considured to be pretty forgiving, and doesn't mind taking in others)
Tall. I think leaning on 5,9 for the twins. Maybe actually 6,1 for Lorian. Tall but not too tall.
And yeah one update, Milo in Noxs route has a shimmering spade ;)
Yeah, they are the secret route ;)
treat your head then
I'll go through them. I have a patch planned to fix a missing scene too ;)
"the behavior I condone In real life" The particle “not” is missing, but although everything can be approved, as long as it is mutual :)
Thanks for catching that whoopsie!!! I updated it right before bed last night 🤣
There is no way! I also approve of it in real life if I like the person and everything is mutual! :D
exactly ;)