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have been keeping an eye on this since I vaguely remember finding it on the maleyandere Reddit (maybe in one of the comments if not a post?). And I couldn't keep myself only stay curious so I gave it a try!

The prologue established a modern setting, where a blurred, mirrored version of reality effectively built a compelling and relatable foundation. This transported me back to the good ol' certainly more lighthearted days of playing Alice in the Country of Hearts. Ah, I bet this will be another hidden gem to be looked back on fondly, just like that one.

Also found myself one of them who fell for Warren, he was just almost reassuring in that whirlwind of ruined hierarchy/roles world, pushy-hasty at first, but better despite his control-comply-assurance methods—compared to the 'free-bound' menace brat of a catboy, plus I'm more into rabbitguy with all his (possible imagined) breeding/BDSM fetishes anyway so乁| ・ 〰 ・ |ㄏ imagine when my heart just crumbled at that forceful scene of being separated with him and poor rabbit could only tell me to stay strong or whatever 💔 (honestly i wouldn't bat an eye if he just might get a bit more whacko over this haha, have always loved to see those composed-uptight characters lose their minds and break restrain over themselves, so another reason to look forward to Octavius). 

Milo though... He was another level of humourously endearing 'a little confused but he's got the spirit' straightforward bonkers guy.. seemed like he was the dormouse or something? Or maybe just human... 

Speaking of which, I noticed his missing sprite 'milo fn' pic around this scene, in case you weren't aware.


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Warrens Route is days away from release (Volunteer editors LOVE Warren so far! I love love the rabbit man too! He is super high stress and his route is going to constantly test him.) Plus both routes normal and abduction route has its own smut scene ;) Currently everything is in game and working! it was soooo complex to put that code together but I did it!! Warrens route is 17500 words. His first chapter is CRAZY long which needed me to make major code separations lol!

Octavius has a kind personality but super controlling. He is the mad hatter so expect it!(His route is something to look forward to, honestly most of the characters are something to look forward to lol! :) )! 

Alice and the country of hearts, I played a very small amount of it. (I paid for the HORRIBLE translation, it felt like a 5 year old wrote it. I think they just threw it in google translate?) I hope we see a real release one day but I think they went bankrupt (got all their books though ;) )

And yes! Milo is the dormouse ;) He's actually got a pretty BIG role too! 

Thanks so much for pointing out the missing sprite! I would have missed that! Anyways! So happy you like the game so far! 

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during the plaque scene (to go home or diamond kingdom) i got an error:( [image 'nox s2' not found]


edit: wait it actually keeps happening every so often with nox..is anyone else experiencing this is it just me?T-T

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Fixed this error!! ;) it'll be in the next update

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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE  specify that the MC is female :(...

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they did

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I intend to put a gender thing as a they and she in the next update. I actually could not implement it before hand. 

Given certain fetishes I cannot put a male gender unfortunately.

But yeah, as above the characters refer to the MC as female throughout the story

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DO WE GET A THREESOME SCENE WITH NOX AND MILO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

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;) at some point yes

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Was really interesting the only that bothers me that in Nox route we were entertaining him a little too much that it felt strange and unrealistic in a behavior kind of sense. It always is a bot irky to me if characters are written without any kind of sense of realism.

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I didnt want to make it too realistic. But I will most likely change up a lot when chapter 2 comes out. But that will take some time. Releasing the first chapters of the other characters first

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I see i mostly wanted to give you a perspective if that was the idea then that's the idea. I just wanted to share just in case if the MCs character is supposed to be more realistic. Obviously there is not one way people act but the Mc definitely didn't act like most people but again if that was the plan then i don't find it irky anymore. Either way it's just a perspective neither right or wrong and definitely not trying to tell you how you should write. I'm curious to see what chapter 2 will be like ^^

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A bit of the plan ;) though there may be two seperate smut scenes at some point. 


I'm actually a total noob when it comes to writing it haha!

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I checked it out, but sadly unavailable here ;) they game will remain free though for even sanctioned countries to play!

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Nox is REALLY not my type, but just from seeing his route I am DROOLING over to see the other routes with the way the creator writes, I'll love to be screwed up by our bunny boi 

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I'm currently writing his smut scene ;) I actually might be releasing his update far sooner than I anticipated. Every character is different so there's going to be a type somewhere haha

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totally believe you, your writing is fire !!! keep going w/ your project, I'm sure people will appreciate it more than they already do it :)))

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Damn I didn't think my character would get kidnapped on my first run 😭😭 I have no words to describe how much I enjoyed this! I can't wait to read more! I followed you on Tumblr too <3 

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You slap that man!!

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Theres not enough Yandere games for ladies out there, I wish this was on Android so I could play it. It looks amazing!

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I am prepping an android version ;) it's going to be a little bit of work though!

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omg I can't wait for it then! I'll look forward to it lol

Sadly I can't get this to download on mac :(  it didn't work on the itch app or the online download

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Oh no! The mac version didn't work? It didn't download from the website? I can send a private link if you like to a Google drive!

ok i managed to get it to work and it was amazing!!! the tension had me at the edge of my seat. i cannot WAIT for the update!!! thanks for sharing <3

I'm having trouble too! It won't open on mac, how did you get it to work?

OMG YOUR NAME- A FELLOW RAF GIRLY! But ahem, I downloaded it from the internet and then I clicked to open it. My Mac blocked it because it couldn’t run malware check so then you go on privacy settings click  ‘open anyway’  on the game

Hi can i ask what's "raf" stand for?

I'm so happy you got it to work!! I'll post these instructions up for any Mac user too that has trouble ;)

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THIS IS SO INSANELY GOOD? OH MY GOD? I was so pleasantly surprised to go into this game and see all of the pretty visuals. I like how handsome you can tell the guys are but how eerie they kinda look - especially Warren lol. The expressions are great. The atmosphere is so unsettling, too, and the immersion with the audio is perfect. I love the writing. Seriously, the r18 scenes are steamy, the dirty talk is *chef's kiss* and UGH. I just love the characters. This take on Wonderland is so fun. I can't wait to read the next update! 

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Yay! I'm so glad you liked it :) Made this game because honestly, there's barely any yandere games, let alone smut games for woman LOL! I'm so glad you enjoyed the smut scene! Plus Alice in wonderland, although overdone a bit, it's kind of a great way to take advantage of each of those characters!


It was fun to write. And yay! A chef's kiss!! You can check out how the doctor looks on tumblr ;) I update on there a lot!

 https://yanderewonderlandgame.tumblr.com/

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 I stumbled upon this through Tumblr and I'm so glad! Looking forward to the future updates! Will try this out soon ^^

I hope you enjoy it :)

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Really love the work of manipulation and the tension here! there are hard to find manipulative characters that don't use physical violence against their captive, even tho he forced himself with us but he didn't beat us.  He mostly used humiliation to put the player in their place, and that's rly intense holy shit. 

At first, I thought all male characters (aka our captors) would be different types of manipulators...maybe I'm wrong,right???

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To an extent there's not going to be violence subjected on the main character. However certain male characters may be killed depending on the routes you take. Humiliation might play a key part with a few of the characters but each yandere has a very different style from the next ;) 

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Thanks so much!! Hope you enjoy the next route!

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The art style is gorgeous. Both the game mechanics are pretty to look at and the plot itself is interesting. I also like the writing style as it didn't feel like a chore to read. As for the characters I really liked Warren even though he only appeared in few scenes. I love all long, silver haired men. I find him adorable. As for Nox... yeah. I didn't like him at all. I enjoyed slapping him the most. Overall, it's a good game and I'll look forward to the future updates!

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Warrens in the next update ;) all the characters have a certain charm. But hoping to put in warren and the mad  Hatter Doctor Octavius in the next update. Plus a few CGs Most of the routes are actually written out. It's just finalizing now. 

Glad it wasn't a chore to read! My aim is to update it in quick succession hopefully the next route will be up sometime next week!

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Good luck!

Oh my. I will definitely try this out.

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I thought I commented, I hope you like it <3

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